The feedback given back to me was that the layout of my screenplay was well structured. They also said that the story-line and relationship was made clear so the audience becomes attached to the characters. This gives me confidence that the characters will be relatable and liked by the audience.
The actors will be able to improvise as I want it to look as realistic as possible as long as they remember to include some of the key dialogue I have written in the script.
During the first scene, I will place an overlay of a camera screen over the top during editing to make it seem like the POV of Adam's camera.
As for the final comment, I may need to edit my script as it gave off the wrong impression that Adena was in the room at the time.
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