Rough Cut Feedback

After showing the rough cut to the class, I got feedback on what I did well and how could I improve.

The feedback I got was that there was a range of shots. However, the running shot was not in focus so I would need to re-film that. Also the some of the sound doesn't sound realistic such as the walking part. 

The current grade of my short film is a level 3. To improve, the sound needs to be much more realistic. I also need to finish off filming and add credits so that the audience understands the narrative.

Verbal feedback suggested that I add a better transition so that it looks like the camera shutter. Alternatively, I could add an overlay of a camera screen so the idea is made clear to the audience.