Friday, 1 December 2017

Feedback on Second Rough Cut

I wanted to make sure that my short film appealed to my chosen target audience so I some feedback from my classmates. I asked them to write down what they think went well and what I could improve on. 




  • The positives of my short film was that the editing and sound was good. 
  • The titles were effective
  • I need to improve by lowering the volume of the leaves as it sounds too exaggerated.
  • I could also pause the frame to show that a photo is being taken.

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