I wanted to make sure that my short film appealed to my chosen target audience so I some feedback from my classmates. I asked them to write down what they think went well and what I could improve on.
- The positives of my short film was that the editing and sound was good.
- The titles were effective
- I need to improve by lowering the volume of the leaves as it sounds too exaggerated.
- I could also pause the frame to show that a photo is being taken.


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